Anyway, I have rewritten the start again for what I hope to be the last time. I will be reading through the rest during editing while ignoring the beginning chapter until all of that is done. After all, I have to finish rewriting the end, which has now become the beginning of Book Two: Forgotten. I hope to post the completed edit this week for anyone waiting to read it. For now, if you would like to see the new opening, look under the 'Novels' section under the Unbound tab (top right), and I have posted an excerpt.