Okay, so I know I was told not to touch Forsaken (plot and content), but I couldn't help it. the beginning wasn't working! It originally started with a prologue, which I nixed and incorporated into the story because, well, I hate prologues. So do most readers and agents/publishers. Then it opened with a dream sequence, which, let's face it, has been done. It was unique, though, I promise (still the opening in the link to the story) :)
Anyway, I have rewritten the start again for what I hope to be the last time. I will be reading through the rest during editing while ignoring the beginning chapter until all of that is done. After all, I have to finish rewriting the end, which has now become the beginning of Book Two: Forgotten. I hope to post the completed edit this week for anyone waiting to read it. For now, if you would like to see the new opening, look under the 'Novels' section under the Unbound tab (top right), and I have posted an excerpt.
Cheers!
Anyway, I have rewritten the start again for what I hope to be the last time. I will be reading through the rest during editing while ignoring the beginning chapter until all of that is done. After all, I have to finish rewriting the end, which has now become the beginning of Book Two: Forgotten. I hope to post the completed edit this week for anyone waiting to read it. For now, if you would like to see the new opening, look under the 'Novels' section under the Unbound tab (top right), and I have posted an excerpt.
Cheers!